What I need YOU to do during this step:
If you look at your rough drafts, I have given you feedback and circled trouble sentences in red for you to repair.
Write any sentences that are circled in red under the "Write It" box and then repair it using the checklist and write the corrected sentence in the "Repair It" box. As you repair your sentence(s) make sure to check off what you have reviewed on the right under the "Repair Checklist" box.
Things to consider when making revisions:
1.) Are there any unnecessary sentences or bits of information?
If so, take them out or re-word them.
2.) Is my spelling and grammar correct?
3.) Are my characters strong enough and is the plot interesting? If not then build up your plot and characters with vivid imagery and details.